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We broke from the kiss, my heart softly tendered in his caring arms,
as he seemed to be everywhere and everything.
...Breathing through me, beating in my heart and my head once quiet, but
now full of his love songs. And I looked up in the vast darkness and smiled.
His eyes shining brighter than stars, in an endless universe.

"I love you"

Spoken like a native word, flowing so fluent. Though so
quiet leaving my lips, the words spoke power in the loudest cry. Filling the
air between us as once more his lips pressed against mine.

"I love you too." And at that moment, I swore we were infinite. Playing along with the moon and the stars,
in ecstasy so great there were no words to describe it.
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A little Oneshot for the amazing ~zutaratardis! This took way too long to do and upload. So sorry for that. ...I had to constantly rewrite the old story and had to make changes, ...and then no ending came out of it.

Wrote this one a couple of hours ago while listening to a super sweet song from Keith Urban (yes, country), and this sort of came out. ...I didn't name anyone in here, just because you love both Neil and Emmet, and I thought I'd let you choose to who this should be.

Hope this is good! I'll write you another one of course, in case you don't! =D

xxx

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Ps: To anyone out there, -no, I am not ashamed of listening to Keith Urban =D. He writes the sweetest most romantic songs ever, and I am proud to call myself a fan! :laughing:
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*withonekiss Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... Nina. You've done it again. I simply have no words.

But seriously. :laughing: THANK YOUUU!! This is just stunning, and so poetic and just my favourite thing in the whole universe. I love it. I just love it. :heart: Thank you so much! :tighthug:

Okay, I'm going to go and sit in a corner and read this over and over. Tell everyone else to leave me alone for a while. :laughing: :love:
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~shadowdancer13 Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:laughing: :phew: So glad you liked it! ...I thought you would! :laughing:

'Your favourite thing in the whole universe' :laughing: Sure that's not a bit much? ;)
No, no, I'm happy that you love it! You only deserve the best after all! =D
And no problem! Just glad I came around and posted something again! =D
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*withonekiss Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Weeell, my favourite thing in the whole universe at the moment. It tends to change. :laughing: :D
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~shadowdancer13 Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:laughing: Well I'm happy if it's only temporary as well! =D
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*withonekiss Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's going to be temporary for a looong time. :D :laughing:
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This is so beautiful! Very poetic! And girl, I don't blame you! I like Keith Urban too! I love country music in general, but Keith Urban is just plain HOT!! :love:
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~shadowdancer13 Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And Australian! :laughing: ...I just love hearing him talk. Haha. Such a nice guy he is as well, absolutely love his songs.
...I think since I actually sat down three years ago, or so now, and first listened to a country song, he was my favourite singer. Besides Sugarland and Carrie Underwood. ...First song I ever heard of his had to be "I Told You So". ....And then I heard "Making Memories of Us" and I was just hooked. He just writes the sweetest songs, I can literally vouch that I've never heard another artist write like he does.
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I've only heard one or two songs on the radio, I need to get a CD of his. I need a Sugarland CD too, I love Sugarland! They're song, "Stuck Like Glue", is one of two songs that you can't go a single day without hearing on the radio. The other is Lady Antebellum's "Need You Now."
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~shadowdancer13 Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Need You Now" is my mom's favourite song. :laughing: Her ringtone at the moment. I hear it so much it drives me sick sometimes :laughing:. But it's a great song. As for Sugarland, my favourite one would have to be "Everyday America" and "All I Want to Do". ...'Everyday America' was the very first country song I listened to, so, that definitely has to be my favourite one of theirs.

Personally, I don't understand why so many people hate country music. A lot of it is actually very good. And most songs are better than what you hear on the pop radio channels. At least they have more substance. =D
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I love country music! My mom hates it, I love it! She says an ex-roommate of mine ruined me because all we did was listen to country music while we studied. :XD: I don't get why people don't like it either!
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